How successful are you?
Did you start from the bottom or the top?
Have all your dreams come true,
or did you get comfy and stop?
Did you start from the bottom or the top,
always striving for more?
Or did you get comfy and stop,
wondering what it’s all really for?
Always striving for more.
Did you start with clear intention?
Wondering what it’s all really for?
Following your heart is a good direction.
Did you start from the bottom or the top?
Have all your dreams come true?
Following your heart is a good direction.
How successful are you?
This poem was posted for the previous week’s poetry prompt, Success.
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Well done, Brian. I’ve not quite got to grips yet with the pantoum form. Or is it the success, I’m struggling with? Still battling it out.
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Thank you for commenting. I find that, after an entry line, pantoums sort of write themselves. Then I decide if I like what it became. Sometimes it takes a few before I write a decent one.
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